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The one that got away

January 27, 2015
By vanessa parrott BRONZE, Welch, Minnesota
vanessa parrott BRONZE, Welch, Minnesota
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Breeze blowing, Goose bumps spread.

Glass,smoke and the smell rubber. 
A cold bottle lies upon his hands with eyes of suspicion 
Three bodies lay, broken, ripped, and hopeless. 
Dreams die and hope is lost. We question why as if it would have stopped him.

When high pitched ring over take her ears the tear down, washing her bleeding cheeks.
Looking over, his breathing slows. 
Their love was lost, hurt and so real 
Meeting his eyes one last time, she is pulled from whats left of the car.
stairs of horror flash their faces, they pray the two will make it.


The author's comments:

In this peice I talk about 3 young, dumb teenagers. who are out drinking. I start it off with the scean of the car crash and the real details of a simalar situation. The man dies leaving his love. all to do with stupid actions. 


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