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(Apparently) In Love With The Editor

December 31, 2014
By Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"


Once again,

I have cut my heart in two 

and surrendered

in front of you.

Please,

do not hesitate,

not now,

go ahead and tell me

my words have

been said

enough.

I have let you

so make me feel

as though

my heart is just not

red

enough.


The author's comments:

Now That's relatable!


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Author said...
on Oct. 19 2015 at 8:34 am
Dear readers, I'm sorry for the (obnoxious) 'Author's comment' here; that was unintentional.

on Apr. 9 2015 at 10:34 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

Thank you, means a lot!

on Mar. 20 2015 at 12:16 am
honest_iago BRONZE, Midway, Utah
2 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Look on every exit as being an entrance somewhere else." --Tom Stoppard

This is such a heartfelt and beautiful poem--you put so much emotion in a short piece!

Beila BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 12:10 am
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
3 articles 0 photos 519 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

Yes! Thank you! I have nothing to add; you've said it perfectly.

on Feb. 17 2015 at 8:02 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

Thank you very much, @NaturesInk !

on Jan. 2 2015 at 9:32 pm
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
74 articles 1 photo 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.”
G.K. Chesterton

"And you, you ridiculous people, you expect me to help you."
Denis Johnson

Very relatable, impacting for sure. I love how you made this short poem mean so much, wonderful work! :)