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"There": Where He Left Me
when he spotted the abandoned clothesline he knew it would be
a safe place to hang his drenched fabrics to dry
(safety was always his priority; practical thinkers are
vigilant thinkers, yet his spontaneity, truly atypical for someone
so thoughtful, enabled this abrupt stop)
he (thoughtfully) unloaded his loot (really… he was always
cautious and [guarded]; the sort of Gentleman who would never think of you
high[ly]
and would likely even chastise you for driving far too recklessly on the way,
despite your nagging yearning for rapidness)
the clothesline has been
There for a while
it remains
There still.
he pinned you up, along with his various articles of fabric
(cotton and yourself left to dangle on a braid of cotton, would-have-beens
and yourself left to dangle between wooden shafts) and scanned the stars
above
his head for nothing in particular (after all,
you always were the one who said you wanted
“nothing in particular” to exist between you two).
he knew fully that mo(u)rning would come eventually;
he was not eager to stay around to watch its Rise
upon the task’s completion (yes, yes he was vigilant, but he bored easily of tedious tasks;
you were likely only a task to him nonetheless)
he promptly started his car and drove away a little too
recklessly and a little too rapidly
he left you
There
to dry or to not
you knew he had solidified your abandonment thoughtfully, in the same way that
he knew (but did not earnestly anticipate) that you might eternally remain
dangling
There
drenched.
you watch him depart and
feel as frightened as he would have been had
he stayed that morning and seen the Rise
(yes, yes he was vigilant, but he bored easily of tedious tasks;
you were likely only a task to him nonetheless)
you dangle
There for a while
you dangle
There still.
(what other choice do you have?)

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Really, you could interpret this piece as a victim of a break-up, death/loss, spirituality, health, or just a really bummed-out piece of laundry and be correct. I've come to very much enjoy the poem's versatility, so I leave it 100% open to interpretation.
Hope you enjoy as well.
(Inspired by the Syntactical Technique of e. e. cummings)