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Sun Set

October 30, 2014
By cho22 GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
cho22 GOLD, Gainesville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls" -Pablo Picasso


I watched the sun set tonight.
I watched

The color palate of the scene
ignite from blues and greens
to gold.

The shadows stretched across the earth
     as if dancing
          in heaven’s hearth.
The way the flare
     flickered through
          the cracks between the leaves…
It glittered and it glared
     atop
          the air’s serenity.
and I could only marvel at how
the sun wraps the world in warmth
and touches all with its glow
     yet spares all from its flame.

I watched
and wondered, when I die,
     How will my sun set?
How many people and places and things
     will I have enveloped with my warmth?
How far and how deep from the horizon
     will my light have flooded and flowed?
How many shadows will have waltzed,
     inspired by my glow?

I watched
and wished to make my life –
until my time to set –
     a dance, a flame, a light that shines
and turns all things
to gold.


The author's comments:

A reflection on what I truly want my life to be about, especially in the midst of stressful thoughts regarding what to pursue as my future career.


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on Nov. 7 2014 at 11:51 am
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

Once again, beautiful, hello22!! I love, love, love your writing! This poem is so deep and wonderful. I really liked where you said "when I die, How will my sun set?"