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Overlook

October 20, 2014
By aashna1231 BRONZE, West Windsor, New Jersey
aashna1231 BRONZE, West Windsor, New Jersey
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A few steps down the road,

A great tree once stood.

With branches made for feet,

And bristles with a ticklish feel.

Down the road we'd race,

And up the giant we'd climb.

To feel the cool breeze,

To see the sights,

To feel so free.

Time free from reality,

A waning moment of independence.

High up above the rules and responsibilities,

Feeling the sheer freedom of a place of our own.

 

The branches have been clipped,

The bristles lay on the ground.

A stump is left,

A mere reflection of our great abode.

The rules and responsibilities have resurfaced,

Leaving us pining for that freedom once more.

Though the moment has passed,

The stump radiates the memories formed long ago.


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece to reflect the memories of my childhood with my neighborhood friends. We used to climb this large pine tree all the way to the top, and sit up there for hours. Though the tree is no longer there, when I walk by the place it stood I feel youthful and remember the great memories we had there. I hope this poem makes other people remember their childhood adventures as well.


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