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Fall Apart

October 19, 2014
By itsyourmaingirl SILVER, Flint, Texas
itsyourmaingirl SILVER, Flint, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Show me a family of readers and I will show you the people who will change the world.


Every word he said,

scratched her heart.

Every move he made,

made her fall apart.

So, she pushed him away.

For fear that if she let him stay,

she wouldn't be able,

to make it through  the day.


The author's comments:

I hope people will be able to relate to the girls pain as she is trying to get through a hard breakup.


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Redolvene GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2015 at 8:58 am
Redolvene GOLD, Sunny, Florida
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The rhyming in your poem is perfect. I also love the message and how relatable it is. Great piece :)

on Nov. 25 2014 at 10:44 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

So true! And beautiful too.

on Nov. 11 2014 at 7:09 am
Firefaerie SILVER, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not pity the dead. pity the living, and above all, those who live without love" - J.K Rowling
"There's always another secret" -Brandon Sanderson

Simple, yet straight to the point. I like it, very relatable. In fact I know of some people that could relate to this on a daily basis, always pushing others away, so as not to hurt them and be hurt.

on Oct. 26 2014 at 11:14 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 347 comments
aww nice poem. yeah i so can relate. for your first poem on here its really good! nicce work.

on Oct. 26 2014 at 11:13 pm
RoseLove SILVER, Collinsville, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth is always bitter to those who fear it." -The Mad Hatter

I went through the same pain a few weeks ago, but I found a wonderful guy and we've been dating for three weeks. It gets better <3