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Jewel On The Sky's Tiara

October 13, 2014
By TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”


I listened to the rain,

---Those chattering sounds they make when they are pellets

of shattered skies hitting hard against my windowsills,

When the skies cried,

?

And the winds - they swept away the tears,

Hoping to erase them from our sight,

But i am not blinded ,

By the tangible views of the blazing stars,

-Jewels on the sky's tiara,

I called them,

And by the moment idle desire crept into my empty soul,

I was taken into a surreal world i never knew existed,

That was lucid and tangible,

Even in my dreams,

And they were,

Raised in the dark skies,

That stretch across the pink horizon,

Everything seems to looked so small here,

Even for the larks that flew across,

And there were more jewels of precious stones from the sky's tiara,



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on Feb. 12 2015 at 1:31 pm
Losutus_soul BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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trishaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * groans*

on Oct. 18 2014 at 7:39 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”

Thank You A zilion Emily! Your compliments mean  lot for me :) You are certainly one of many great writers I admire ! Know that you are an amazing one as well :)

on Oct. 18 2014 at 7:37 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”

Aww! Thanks A lot! I do really really really appreciate it! :D And though I hope I would get published someday, I don't think they will put this in the magazine, there are still loads of potential piece sent by other teens, you included!

on Oct. 18 2014 at 7:34 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”

Thank You a lot Armadeus! I am glad you like it !!! It means  a lot for me :)

on Oct. 17 2014 at 3:33 pm
Armadeus_Zoolitzer GOLD, Ratter Corner, Other
15 articles 11 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Arose by any other name is still the past tense of arise." Steve Patterson on CBC's The Debators "The devil's greatest trick was chopping the water into separate bathtubs. Then attaching claws to those bathtubs." Bob Schofield's The Inevitable June

Such a unique outlook and so beautifully written. As you describe, this poem in itself is surreal and like being in a lucid dream. I could really lose myself in this work, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done. And may I say... Masterful.

on Oct. 17 2014 at 3:24 pm
littlepiepschuim PLATINUM, Las Vegas, Nevada
22 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.”
― Ray Bradbury
“There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you.”
― Maya Angelou
“There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.”
― Ernest Hemingway

I can't even begin to describe how much I love this. This is definitely going in my favorites(: Keep up the great work; this belongs in the magazine!

on Oct. 17 2014 at 10:17 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is absolutely, beautiful, Trish! Congarts on having it voted, you truly deserve it! :) I love this, so much. It's just so, beautiful and amazingly and well-written. You have such a talent and greatness and light in you. You are an amazing and wonderful and talented writer and person. Haha, it's true. So, believe that. :) Thank you so much, for sharing this, my friend! :)