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I Was There

September 26, 2014
By CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn
You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

You sang,

I was your song.

You wept,

I was your shoulder.

You tripped,

I picked you back up.

But when you died,

I cried.

The author's comments:

I hope this poem makes sence but if it doesn't it means that I was there for you until the end.

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on Dec. 6 2014 at 11:18 am
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live

This piece has something in it. Seriously. I felt blood rush all through me when I read it!   

on Nov. 16 2014 at 6:59 pm
goetz_17 SILVER, Odessa, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient, and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best." -Marilyn Monroe

I relate  

LyricBlunt said...
on Oct. 23 2014 at 4:36 pm
LyricBlunt, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Music expresses who you are as a person." "Oh, butterfingers."Opportunities' come when you least expect it, it is all up to you what you do with them. Life sometimes throws you a curveball, you just got to go with it sometimes.

This piece or writing/poem is short like 1timothy412 said, but it is also beautiful it is kinda of sad that the person died, but you were there till the end, that is what counts. When I read this I though about my family, my friends, and evn other people I care about

on Oct. 4 2014 at 9:34 pm
PureDrawings BRONZE, Chandler, Arizona
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its short yet full or emotion. I love this. even tho it made me cry and remind me of someone.