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Beauty is the Beast MAG

By Anonymous

Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands

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s352619 said...
on Sep. 13 at 6:17 pm
s352619, Chandler, Arizona
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I love this poem, it's beautifully written. You perfectly describe this 'deceiver' and how she cleverly lures her victims, embodying the title, "Beauty is the Beast". Good work, whomever you may be. Keep it up!

AlecZ said...
on Sep. 13 at 12:48 pm
AlecZ, Chandler, Arizona
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This is a REALLY amazing poem. I absolutely love it, the words fit together very well and the poem flows like it should! The title is also just phenomenal, it is simple, and basic, yet it tells you so much about the poem and what it's going to talk about. I'd love to see more of your poems in the future!

kell BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 at 11:37 am
kell BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"broken people dont hide from their monsters. broken people let themselves be eaten." - francesca zappia

beauty is a social construct. beauty is in fact in the eye of the beholder.

on Mar. 29 at 5:59 pm
Madison-Abigail-White BRONZE, Independence, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"No other Success can compensate for failure in the home"

wow.... amazing

on Feb. 28 at 5:54 pm
Winstead BRONZE, Raleigh, North Carolina
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This is the kind of poem that gives you goosebumps it is so good! I just posted my first work-it would mean so much to me if you would check it out! Thanks!

on Feb. 28 at 5:53 pm
Winstead BRONZE, Raleigh, North Carolina
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This is the kind of poem that gives you goosebumps it is so good! I just posted my first work-it would mean so much to me if you would check it out! Thanks!

Chantal2021 said...
on Oct. 15 2020 at 8:46 am
Chantal2021, Ewing, New Jersey
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I like how the topic of the poem "beauty is a beast" is switched instead of it being about a guy it's about a woman who could also be dangerous.

starzx said...
on Jul. 4 2019 at 11:02 am
starzx, Manhattan, New York
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This is so good! It's incredible and beautiful. Great job!

on Feb. 12 2018 at 9:33 pm
starfeather PLATINUM, Olathe, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
AD ASTRA PER ASPERA- to the stars, through difficulties.

Wow, just wow. You've got some real talent, and you are so creative! I love the word choice and the twist of Beauty being the real beast. It's a very interesting idea. You should definitely keep writing!!

Fantastic poem

on Aug. 8 2016 at 6:53 am
pineappler03 SILVER, Waterford, Connecticut
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This is so creative and different from another poem I've ever read. Plus the word choice is very captivating. Really amazing work!

on Apr. 26 2013 at 6:21 pm
BlackRosePetalz SILVER, Miramar, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon; even if you miss, you will land among the stars.

Ooh...this was quite interesting. Gave me the impression of a succubus-like figure. Quite good! 

on Apr. 20 2013 at 8:57 pm
Gods-little-writer BRONZE, Springfield, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
light can't drive out darkness only darkness can do that, love cannot drive out hate only hate can do that.


Amazing poem. Each detail sticks in my head and i can just picture the what the girl looks like. Keep writing!!

on Apr. 12 2013 at 11:16 am
It sounds soo evil and freaky I LIKE IT

on Apr. 8 2013 at 11:37 am
Theholethatiswhole BRONZE, Auburn, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Trees are poems that the Earth writes upon the sky. We fell them down and turn them into paper, that we may record our emptiness"--Khalil Gibran

Your descriptions are fabulous. The parable of all that shimmer is not Gold is one that is easy to overdo or misuse, but not here. The title is fitting to a T. Please give my poetry a quick look, I am always looking for constructive crticism!

Yolo22 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 2013 at 4:05 pm
Yolo22 BRONZE, Larned, Kansas
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I like pandas

on Mar. 17 2013 at 1:18 am
pulledheartstring, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong. -- Mahatma Gandhi

Ooh... not everything beautiful is good.

on Mar. 12 2013 at 2:40 am
digyBritt SILVER, Rochester, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"be in love with your life. Enjoy every minute of it." -Jack Keronae

Title = perfection

on Feb. 16 2013 at 6:03 pm
Gracias1996 SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu

GREAT JOB! I am a new writer, would love if u guys check out my work!! ;)

on Feb. 6 2013 at 2:04 pm
PirateCountry DIAMOND, Muncie, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."

This sent shivers down my spine. Good job!