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It's Almost Three

July 15, 2014
By lily9799 PLATINUM, Franklin, Wisconsin
lily9799 PLATINUM, Franklin, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it." -Voltaire


It’s almost three,
And I wonder if that’s why I’m writing all these things of you.
My mind is going quickly,
and I lose what could have brought me to you clearly,
Dreams, dreams, I want to dream
But god I know I can’t
If I do I might end up with you torn quickly and
I can’t I can’t I can’t I can’t survive,
You want to know the truth?
I think I’ll die if I wake up without a word from you.


The author's comments:
Poem 1 of 28 of my 'Late Night Poems' Collection

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on Jul. 17 2014 at 7:46 pm
lily9799 PLATINUM, Franklin, Wisconsin
49 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it." -Voltaire

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 17 2014 at 12:27 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

This is AWESOME! For me, it felt like you were writing about a dream you'd just had, which I do ALL the time, every morning! :)  Really, really great poem!!!