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Breathless

May 22, 2014
By Anonymous

a wisp of wind
the silent breeze
he was right here then

a breath of air
the surge of his warmth
his longing stare

a warm hand down my back
his hand in my grasp
an amusing attack

his hands slip further
and down to my belt loops
and then a slight murmur

"i love you Beatrice Prior"
she sighs and leans in
while he meets her eyes to admire

and in that warmhearted wake
she dies at the end
and there is nothing left for him to take


The author's comments:
This was a short clip that i wrote, admiring the Divergent series. i did a flashback of Tobias having Tris against the wall and telling her how beautiful she was and that he loved her, but that disappears when she dies in the end. when Tobias has nothing left to hang on to. Tris was his healer and only comfort and from what i understand, the only girl he will ever love.

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