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My Paramour

May 20, 2014
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski


these streets move together,
bodies close-pressed

one

and yet I feel the space between us

I,
your paramour

you,
my paradigm

and as twilight falls on these
unfamiliar faces,
still

I only see you in
my mind



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on Jun. 13 2014 at 5:39 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

Beautifully written

on Jun. 5 2014 at 4:08 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Wow, thank you! :)

on Jun. 5 2014 at 12:21 am
malloryryan07 BRONZE, Brookwood, Alabama
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That was so perfect. Keep writing; you're amazing!

on Jun. 3 2014 at 11:12 am
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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Fair enough :)

on Jun. 2 2014 at 8:38 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

maybe not :)

on Jun. 2 2014 at 3:02 pm
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
5 articles 0 photos 266 comments
OK, I can see the dedication in this but I don't think you put it very well. It's too brief. Maybe you could extend and expand on this idea? :)


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