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Love-Light-Eclipse

May 1, 2014
By welovetv1234 BRONZE, Fort Myers, Florida
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"God gives his hardest battles to his toughest soldiers" -Unkown

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Sun half peek
Clouds turn pink
With the one you love most
they begin to weep

Moment so strong
Love couldn't be wrong
When you're with the one that
makes every problem go gone

Breathe and slient
lean in; so vibrant
Just close your eyes
kiss her lips
Both your body's make that
perfect eclipse

© Jovee B., Dededo, Guam

The author's comments:
I was listening to a country love song in the car on the Interstate while the sun was going down. Just a perfect combination to right a love poem.
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