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Natural

May 8, 2014
By Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski


You felt me
under the darkness of a half-lit moon struggl-
ing to peek out from around a
cloud, you
touched my heart in ways that the river
beside us
wanted to reflect on it's glisten-
ing surface for-
ever,
and I wish I could tuck away in
the gentle breeze
the moment you kissed me, and cherish
it every time the
wind blows -
do you see how natural this is?



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on Jun. 6 2014 at 6:20 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it :)

on Jun. 6 2014 at 12:41 am
MissExploration BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
1 article 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
It Can Only Fly When It Needs To.

When I saw the title of this poem, I thought this poem would be about something else. I like how you used the water and the moon to connect it to a kiss. The poem felt really relaxing and calm. I thought it was interesting how you used a dash for some of the words, it made everything flow perfectly. Good job! 


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