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Looking Down with Pity

February 10, 2014
By Norwayday GOLD, Maineville, Ohio
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Norwayday GOLD, Maineville, Ohio
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Life is tough but so are you.

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I think you expected me to pull you out
but I too was drowning
We were falling
deeper
and
deeper together
But one day you realized
all you needed was yourself
and you were your own savior
So here I am falling
deeper
and
deeper alone
And there you are looking down at me with pity

© Sindi J., Westminster, MD

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