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Invisible

February 13, 2014
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran


I am invisible.
A chameleon.
A criminal.
I am invisible.
Blending into the night.
Going out like a light.
I am invisible.
Unnoticed.
Unloved.
I am invisible.
Nobody sees the knife.
As it pierces my skin
I am invisible.
Sitting in the corner.
Forlorn, forgotten.
I am invisible.
No matter how I try.
I simply can not go.
I am invisible.
My own blade can not see.
The pain inside of me.
I am invisible.
You can only see.
The monster inside.
Fighting to be free.


The author's comments:
Pretty self explanatory I'd say...
This is about my life...

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on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:49 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Thank you!

on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:07 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

You have!!

on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:05 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Sad and powerful! I wish I could make you feel better!

on Mar. 4 2014 at 10:49 am
JacobTheOrdinary PLATINUM, Rancho Cucamonga, California
43 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is the lie that tells the truth."

I like this piece because it feels completely relatable. Everyone feels like that at some point. Great work.

on Feb. 27 2014 at 12:27 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Thank youi! Most of my pieces are sad

.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 22 2014 at 12:34 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
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Very deep emotions here, it's sad in my opinion, but greatly written; Keep up the great work! C: