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Red Ideas MAG

February 8, 2014
By heavyfeet GOLD, Austin, Texas
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heavyfeet GOLD, Austin, Texas
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The air is full of ideas

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Red ideas, like
pomegranates that shine
bubble a sweet,
sweet
soda in my mind.
They fizz into my thoughts
and spill their redness
onto this page.

© Susan R., Iselin, NJ

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heavyfeet GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2014 at 9:19 pm
heavyfeet GOLD, Austin, Texas
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Thank you so much :) You made my day, and I'm very grateful that you took the time to read and respond to my work.  I cannot tell you how glad I am, you really put a smile on my face.
chasing_fantasies_ GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2014 at 2:35 pm
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Hi! Im the teacher's assistant in my creative writing class and we were going through the magazine. Multiple students recognized this peice and said great things about your peice.  Just to brighten your day, here is what they said. Good descriptive quality, touching, relatable, and memory enducing. Have a great day! Can't wait to read your other peices!