S.A.I.L.B.O.A.T. (Acrostic)

February 5, 2014
By .king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)


Staggering out at sea,
An
Independent soul,
Like king of the waves,
But,
Other woeful times
Abducted
Tragically...

by the deep blue.


The author's comments:
An acrostic, using the word 'Sailboat',
Comments are appreciated! :D

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on Feb. 22 2016 at 11:39 am
mxmumpwr SILVER, Johnson City, Tennessee
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This is a really good poem. I love how the last line finishes off the acrostic poem and can also follow after sailboat.

AmericaniumJ said...
on Jun. 19 2015 at 7:34 pm
AmericaniumJ, Eureka, Utah
0 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Though she be but little, she is fierce!
-Shakespeare

I love how you break the rhythm at the end. I also love the disequilibrium in the editing style! Keep it up!

on Feb. 15 2015 at 1:06 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I like the way this is designed and written, especially the final sentence and the way it breaks the mold of the rest of the poem.

on Nov. 19 2014 at 1:51 pm
Shadow_hunter SILVER, Nairobi, Other
6 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Doing things that have not been done yet, is called aspiration and fulfilling them is success"

it is just great and awesome and beautiful and creative and all wonderfull adjectives

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 12:58 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

LOL, me too. Maybe it wants some attention. O_O

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 12:58 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Yeah, and thanks. I sorta got stuck on writer's block for a while. But I believe I'm back, hope you do read more. :)

midnightwoah said...
on Jul. 30 2014 at 2:41 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve." -Stephen Chbosky

I saw what you did there! I want to write a poem in this format to about people putting words in my mouth. Hope to read more from you :>

on May. 18 2014 at 2:41 pm
Bronwyn-Sophronia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

really Great! XP

on Apr. 30 2014 at 2:54 pm
sillywabbit BRONZE, Federal Way, Washington
2 articles 3 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where there is love there is life.
Mahatma Gandhi

I lreally liked this

on Mar. 3 2014 at 2:53 pm
Shadow_Wolf GOLD, Mayfield Heigts, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is not opening your eyes but opening your heart."
"You see not with your eyes, But with your heart."
"Think first with your heart not your head."
"If it has a heart, It is human."

Amazing Wonerful  Exciting

on Mar. 2 2014 at 5:18 pm
KierstenB BRONZE, Burgaw, North Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are two most important days in your life. The day you are born and the day you find out why.
Mark Twain

This Poem is good. I think that it could be edited to make it better though! Good Job(=

Harri SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2014 at 4:57 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
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I don't think I have seen a poem like this before. I really liked it! Keep up the good work!

raya150 said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 4:16 pm
raya150, New London, Connecticut
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tha was great impressive

on Feb. 24 2014 at 4:01 pm
AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Rise above the storm and you will find the sunshine.
-Mario Fernandez

i like that you did a great job. and yes it reminded me of that tsunami, that took many lives. sometimes i wonder why the sea has to do taht but i guess it does get angry sometimes. :/

on Feb. 20 2014 at 6:51 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

This reminded me of the tragic tsunami that swept away precious lives. Good composition. 

on Feb. 19 2014 at 11:52 pm
PhoenixTears GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
11 articles 6 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. And then you die." ~Jacob (Twilight)

I really liked how you used the acrostic format, but conveyed such emotion and meaning into those words. Great  job, and keep it up!

on Feb. 18 2014 at 1:12 pm
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
33 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. "
Thomas Gray

Short, yet amazing. I love the last line at the end outside the acrostic part it makes it very powerful :)

on Feb. 16 2014 at 3:05 pm
xxMedievalShadexx GOLD, Deerfield Beach, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable. -Bruce Lee

That was awesome ;o

on Feb. 15 2014 at 12:46 pm
Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
8 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye will make the whole world blind....

short and wonderfull

on Feb. 14 2014 at 4:35 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

I really like this. Its beautiful.


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