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Grandpas' Grip

January 13, 2014
By Ethan Shaw BRONZE, Salt Lake City, Utah
Ethan Shaw BRONZE, Salt Lake City, Utah
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Like the beaches of Cancún, nothing casts shadows.
Grandpas’ hands, long fingers and palms wrapped
loosely in pale, almost transparent skin, illuminated by the anxious lake surrounding us.
Shaking, he delicately tilts the fishing pole back toward us after
we catch the slippery pumpkin sunfish.
The fish is flailing to escape, ironically making the fishing line,
a single spindle of spider-web,
shudder,
as if a spider overtaking it’s prey at the end.
One lanky hand releases the pole to hold the line above the fish,
slowly sliding down, until concealing the fish’s sharp fins with an experienced grip.
“Is the fish slippery and hard to hold?” I ask.
“A tight grip once you reach the fish is the key.” He says.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem in my creative writing class this year when the prompt was given to write a piece about a memory of someones' hands teaching or showing us how to do something. Mine is about my Grandpa, teaching me how to fish and remove a catch from the hook on Big Pine Island Lake in Grand Rapids Michigan.

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