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Do You Feel That?

December 29, 2013
By MingMing98 BRONZE, Roy, Washington
MingMing98 BRONZE, Roy, Washington
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Do you feel that?
That pain?
That sadness?
The hopelessness?
Do you feel the way i do?
Do you feel the pain?
Have you lost your will to breathe?
To do anything?
Have you lost your sense of who you are?
Who you were?
Who you could ever be?
I have.
I lost my will to breathe.
You took it from me.
I lost my sense of who I am.
You took it from me.
I don't know what I ever could be.
I have no will.
I have no strength.
All there is,
is an empty pain.
The pain doesn't even feel real.
It's empty just like the rest of me.
I'm a shell.
Not even that.
I'm hardly a soft breeze.
I'm like the faintest whisper.
Dying to be heard.
But I know it'll never be.
I mean how could it?
I'm me.

The author's comments:
Just something that came to mind at 3 in the morning while I was thinking. This is what goes through my mind almost every night.

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