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Hating On me

December 19, 2013
By ___Shania BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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___Shania BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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you have to have self disicpline in your life.

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I have summer hating on me
Cause I am hotter than the sun
Have spring hating on me
Cause I’m never sprung
Winter hating on me
Cause I’m colder than you

And I would never, I would never,
I would never fall.
I am being hated on seasons
So apparently for no reason.

© Cara L., Cheney, WA

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I used a lot of metaphor so you can understand the poem and figurative language.
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