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Visiting The Dead

December 11, 2013
By Gisselle0077 BRONZE, Tucker, Georgia
Gisselle0077 BRONZE, Tucker, Georgia
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As I stroll through the rusted heavy iron gate, broken and chipped gravestones stare at me.
Birthdays and death days are engraved, everlasting memories carved on a stone wall.
Dead patches of grass and an empty field only add to the somber mood.

The fog wraps the stones and memorials like a blanket in the cold of November.
Moonlight shimmers down barely making it through the Weeping Willow tree and landing on
the broken graves.

Screeching from the sky, which clouds make them unseen, the bats screamed from the
direction of the tallest tree.
The hooting from the owl on top of the grave startles me.


Does a grave of someone who’s life was tragically ripped away lay where I stand?
How many people walked by this graveyard remembering those no longer with them?
Has anyone ever disturbed any of these people from their eternal sleep?
How many tears were shed in this very spot by?


The Colonial Cemetery tricks my mind making me feel as though someone is watching me, but
as I turn around and see big yellow eyes staring at me, I realize that Mother Nature has yet again
played another trick on me.



Shriek



shrIEK



SHRIEK


The author's comments:
At Trickum Middle school the probe and accelerated classes went on a field trip to Savannah, Georgia.

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Bauhaus BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2013 at 12:18 pm
Bauhaus BRONZE, Ocala, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"And so being young and dipped in folly, I fell in love with Melancholy."

I like the Very dark atmosphere you gave. Cemeteries are quite lovely places to visit.. I enjoyed your work.