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Falling

November 26, 2013
By Rayne__ SILVER, Vero Beach, Florida
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Rayne__ SILVER, Vero Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Wit beyond measure is mans greatest treasure."

“I didn't want to wake up. I was having a much better time asleep. And that's really sad. It was almost like a reverse nightmare, like when you wake up from a nightmare you're so relieved. I woke up "

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Falling-
Dropping faster,
inhaling dirt
mixed with lies.
Eyes closed,
arms out.
Ready to hit,
ready for a steady silence,
an end that never comes.
Falling-
Screaming.
Down the rabbit hole,
the more I try to stop...
the faster down I go.

© Caroline C., Coronado, CA

The author's comments:
Most of the poetry I write is about me falling- I always feel that, in life, I am falling for some reason, for something. It's very personal and it's automatically what my brain thinks of when I think about how I feel.
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