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Thum Thum

November 11, 2013
By PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"there are 2 types of writer's: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder"Brian Aldiss
"Some things i cannot change but til i try i'll never know" Wicked the musical

There was a pounding rhythmic pressure in my head
I felt like I was trapped in the crashing waves of the ocean.
Being turned over, and over without being able to stop myself.
I couldn’t breathe, or think.
I even lost hold of your hand.
I don’t remember closing my eyes but I suppose I did and I couldn’t open them again.
The pressure grew louder and louder; faster and faster on the sides of my head.
Thum-thum, Thum-thum, thum, thum, thum, thumthumthum THUM, THUM THUM!

The author's comments:
this is an excerpt from the book i'm writing on here "the epic adventures of milo and shea" if you read it you will understand the picture. i would love if you would read it! Thanks!

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