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Listening to Age

October 16, 2013
By Shosta BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
Shosta BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
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Early morning getting ready for work
the sun barely risen, still rising.
I listen intently to morning.
Outside a sleepy bird chirp, no cars.
Cooking with quiet kitchen sounds.
The TV flickering, too low to really hear.
“Why is he wearing that?”
Crabby voice from the couch.
I don’t jump
mother has slept on the couch.
“Those impractical clothes must be hot as heck!”
I chew mindlessly.
“These people are strange!”
I am quiet, but not the sink water.
“Who plays guitar like that?”
Dishes clink as I put them away.
“No one wears their strap that short!”
I tread carefully up the stairs.
The program ends, downstairs in silence once again.
I listen to my mother grow old.


The author's comments:
Listening to my mother say these things early on a quiet Saturday morning inspired this piece. I realized that as she leaves her youth the world seems foreign through her narrowing and aging eyes. I suppose I just want people to read this and try and age with an open mind. Observe younger generations, but try not to criticize too much.

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