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non everlasting

October 4, 2013
By josephine barimah BRONZE, Oakpark, Michigan
josephine barimah BRONZE, Oakpark, Michigan
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I was Favored,
To be planted at the Right time.
Life was all about,
Ecstasy and Cosset
As I sprouted to be a tree.
How could I not become enormous?
A fact that could never be denied.

Alluring, Superb and Proliferating with leaves and fruits.
How proud was I?
Very Proud.

The moment had come for me take
Care for myself.
I was striked ,
By a Bad season just as I started my journey.
Unbelievable.

But I remember, someone once sighed,
"The course wouldn't be Even, Always"
"But Never Lose,

HOPE.

I Sniveled,
And endured Agony.
Fortunately and Surprisingly, I'm now more beautiful than I used to be.
The Saying was really Authentic.
My Pain Was BUT,
For a Moment.
There is More SLEEP after DEATH.


The author's comments:
“Non Everlasting” by Josephine B was very interesting. Barimah stressed her words by Capitalizing the whole word or the first letter no matter where it appeared in the poem. She capitalized “Hope” in line 19 and “Sleep” as well as “Death” in the last line to make emphasis and show how important those words were in the poem. She capitalized the first letters of some words to also show emphasis. Example , in line 8, she capitalizes , “alluring, superb and proliferating. She uses personification in line 16 to express how the tree hears like a human being. She makes “HOPE” Stand on its own in line 19 to show the main idea of the poem.
She breaks the poem into stanzas to slow the reader and also to give the reader the idea of the poem details as he or she reads.

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