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The reoccurring and ever losing battle

October 4, 2013
By Anonymous

I am fading
All of me here within a space of white and a cringing blink of grey.
I bite, cry out and fight tooth and nail, creating scars, bruises and a bleeding nose.
I can taste the blood from my nose still and hear my heart racing in my chest
I feel the spasms in my brain that give this bowl of pain and it runs over.
I appear.
I cool my skin and wash my face, cleaning hell’s dust from my eyes.
And as usual I am resurrected to my mother, with her sad smile and a cup of coffee.


The author's comments:
In “The reoccurring and ever losing battle” the speaker documents the experience of her medical condition. She uses spacing to show the start and end of her ordeal, drawing the reader to pay special attention to those parts. Although this poem is about a specific topic, it is not presented as so. The speaker was cryptic enough for the experience to be taken for something else, for example a nightmare, yet still reveling enough for the readers to know that her experience is not pleasant. The ending of the poem is less dramatic than that beginning, giving detail and showing that her experience is, to her, normal.

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