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Beautiful Fine Glass

October 3, 2013
By PorcelainJ BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
PorcelainJ BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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My name is Porcelain
It means beautiful fine glass
It is like the number 1
It is like a light, smooth color
It is like the time my mom took me out
Just mom and daughter day
It is the memory of my mother
Who taught me how to become a young lady
And how to dress
When she taught me
I didn’t really like it
I don’t like being taught things
My name is Porcelain
It means beautiful fine glass


The author's comments:
The first time when I wrote the poem, I just wrote my poem in sentences like a regular paragraph. Then when I wrote it again and made some corrections. I use line breaks and line lengths. I used these so I can start a new sentence.

The ways that I changed in my poem were I changed some words that didn’t make sense.

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