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I come from...

October 3, 2013
By Jeremiah Davis BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
Jeremiah Davis BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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This picture of me,
It reminds me of

Who

I


Am
When I look at it,
It makes me remember,

Who

I’ve


Become
This picture of me,
It makes me feel happy,
Makes me feel like I’m caring,
Even though,
I’m not caring to many


It always,
Makes me feel smart and talented,
It describes me well,
If you basically look at it,
The picture explains the definition of,
ME!

Reflection:
In this story, I used not a lot of sensory details. I feel that there is much more skill that I could do to this poem. I like the way I started off in 2 small lines then a white space, then another one. Then after that I went into 2 stanzas. Doing this activity made me become a stronger writer.



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