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life and every thing around it

July 14, 2013
By Anonymous

this is about my life and every thing around it yes i may be 16. i know this sounds stupid but have u ever felt your all alone i have. i have people talk about a lot say things i don't know an what do i have to do about it nothing there is to do. who ever feels this way there is nothing for us to do . like family and buddy's they say stuff behind your back then they say she is comeing how would you feel if you heard that. An you know its about you like lets say you bring out something you want to eat thin your not hungry so you take it back will that's when you hear them talking about you .I had just seen it because it happened to me . thank you for reading :)

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this could happen to you or even did then you feel made or up set
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inactiveuserisinactive BRONZE said...
on Jul. 16 2013 at 10:04 pm
inactiveuserisinactive BRONZE, Gainesville, Florida
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I got what you were trying to say, but to be painfully honest your atrocious grammar and repetitive spelling mistakes kept me from being able to enjoy your message. The lack of paragraphs made it a mess of words, and could have been easily fixed by some simple formatting changes. Of course, if you had formatted the poem this way to add a sense of confusion to make a point, that's one thing. I'm really not trying to be rude, and the mistakes you made are extremely easy to fix. Next time, you could always ask someone to be your beta, and read over your work for any mistakes to avoid this. Best of wishes! :)