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free fall MAG

September 24, 2008
By Mitra Jouhari, Cincinnati, OH

I am free falling at 90 miles per
hour with the taste of you on my
lips and the echo of your words in
my ears. i am free falling at 90
miles per hour but i have no desire to stop,
yet i know perfectly well
that the ground will end my descent
and wake me from this dream where
falls do not break me and eyes do not
see me and cold hands cannot touch me
and lies do not float so gently off
your tongue.


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on Jan. 18 2012 at 12:55 pm
Daisysmile101 BRONZE, Buffalo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"What lies behind us and what lies before of us is a tiny matter compared to what lies within us"
Walt Emerson

truly amazing poem. i had to share it with my friends i loved it.

on Dec. 5 2011 at 3:57 pm
Zachisme BRONZE, Danville, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to your fullest

You should read one of mine, Falling, it's very similar

abbya BRONZE said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 2:39 pm
abbya BRONZE, St.Charels, Missouri
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This is amzazing!!!

look at my work if you want :)


jennasbrain said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 11:55 am
jennasbrain, Pine Knob, Colorado
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this is a gorgeous poem.

MRose911 GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 10:53 pm
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"No boy is worth crying over and the one who is won't make you cry." - Sarah Kane

This is amazing! wow! I love this! :)

on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:27 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

:) this is so beautiful :) I would love to hear your opinion on my work

on Nov. 7 2010 at 7:39 pm
lovebug18 BRONZE, Columbia, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Stressed is just another way to spell desserts..just take a piece of cake..

~unknown

I prefer pie : )

so lovely..

on Jul. 5 2010 at 2:27 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

this peom took my breath away because i am going though the same thing in my life.

on Jun. 3 2010 at 4:22 pm
LaughingGirl GOLD, Ocala, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Play the music not the instrument. -Author Unknown

I agree with you

on May. 12 2010 at 8:23 pm
.m.u.s.i.c. BRONZE, Cedarburg, Wisconsin
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This was really beautiful.(:

MitraJ said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 7:59 pm
Thank you so much! It makes me happy to know that I'm touching someone with my poetry, that's really all that matters. Thanks.

MitraJ said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 5:50 pm
Thank you so much. I really appreciate that and I'm glad you liked it. I'd love to check out some of your work when I have more time. Thanks again!

on Nov. 5 2009 at 1:53 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Simply beautiful. Passed the goosebump test for great poetry. I'd love it if you could check out some of my work. I'm loving yours.

Lixxy93 said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 4:50 pm
This is amazing, very close to my heart and what I have been feeling as well. Wonderfully written

on Aug. 8 2009 at 4:01 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Wow! Very deep and powerful. Good job. I loved it!

on Jun. 4 2009 at 12:21 pm
I love it!!!!