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Final Mistake

May 25, 2013
By JC_Cath BRONZE, West Linn, Oregon
JC_Cath BRONZE, West Linn, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"That's the thing they don't tell you about being a third wheel - it's not like you're a wheel that's added on. You were one of the original two wheels, but suddenly you're not so important anymore. The relationship drives fine without you."


What am I to do with a shattered glass?
Step on the pieces and hope I bleed?
Pick it up and prick my fingers?
Or sweep it up, learning nothing from my mistake?

What am I to do, now?
The pieces cut through my shields,
into my soul.
The red-glass pierced my mind
sliced my heart.

What am I to do now,
when all I have is a fading vision?
An empty pen?
And nothing to fill it with
except the red life
draining out from under me?






What am
I to do
now, when
all I have left
are broken
sentences

chop
ped
wor
ds

and a lone
ly scar
ed heart?


The author's comments:
This...is a very personal piece. It's about a person, who hopes that they're still human. Can still feel. Can still learn.
This person has made mistakes in her life, a lot of them, and they've hurt her. They cannot accomplish anything with what little life they have left in them.
In the end...all they have is them self, and their scars.
The spacing is very, very important in this poem.

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on Apr. 1 2017 at 2:58 pm
HereSheIs BRONZE, Wellesley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark; the real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light." -Plato

I agree with AmberMichelle. Also, the spacing IS perfect—I love the chop/ped/wor/ds part

on Jun. 2 2013 at 8:57 pm
AmberMichelle BRONZE, Fort Smith, Arkansas
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Really amazing. :)