I love this poem, and the ending especially. I felt like some of the sentences were worded awkwardly though, but that's a minor thing compared to how much I enjoyed reading it (:

Your use of color here is amazing. I love the way you use it to represent the emotions and relationships between people. The only thing is that I don't think it sounds like a poem, rather prose. There's not really a rhythm to it, but it kind of works. Nice work!

Your use of colors in this poem and the use of the photo go together really well. The poems I have read of yours so far have all rhymed. I love that about them.

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it

Wow! The only word I can think of is to say wow! It's amazing how you looked at all the little things, I never thought anyone would really look at what I tried to do to enhance my poetry but I'm so glad you did and I really appreciate it, thank you!

I always enjoy colors being used to enhance the meaning of a poem, so I really like this. It was light-hearted even if the subject matter was rather dark. Nice job.

Oh, hello, it's me.. again. I enjoyed everything about this. I'll tell you what I enjoy about each thing. So, the title, first and most importantly. Titles are so important in writing, they are what people see first and they can make or break something because if the reader doesn't find anything they like about the title, the chances of them clicking the work are small. And this one caught my attention and it left open perpesctive for me. I had no clue what this would be about, but I thought it would be unique. (I was correct.) And I love the fact that you used a color in the title. I love when writers use color in their work. It gives great visuals. Okay, now to the picture. The picture is so odd, I really enjoy looking at it, it's like a puzzle. It also includes many of the colors that you used in the poem. The red, of course. The blue. The white which is close to grey. You did a great job finding a picture that really went with the poem. And last, but certainly not least, the POEM. This was certainly the most amusing and unusual poem that I have ever read. All of the colors that symbolized feelings were wonderful. I love color and I love symbols. The way you rhymed was great, it flowed really nice. I love to see the feelings change along with the colors. As the narrarator gets sadden and the colors change, the poem actually lightens up, and builds to the wonderful ending. I was impressed with this, as I expected to be, but it was so much more than I thought it would be. While I know this was long, I wanted to show you the reasons I loved this. So, one more time, I love this poem. Great job.

How's the sunburn? At least you're red! Thanks, by the way.

I like your use of colors to describe people. but now you have reminded of me of the fact that I have a really bad sunburn and it hurts! but good poem! (as always)