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April 26, 2013
By KaylaRich11 PLATINUM, Hackensack, Minnesota
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Hate is dark black.
It tastes like coal.
It smells like smoke.
And reminds me of death.
It sounds like a little girl screaming.
Hate makes me feel sick.

© Mercedes R., Queens, NY

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Rolledthestone SILVER said...
on Apr. 13 2014 at 12:20 pm
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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"You hypocrite, first take the plank out of your own eye, and then you will see clearly to remove the speck from your brother’s eye." (Matthew 7:5) and "All the poeple who supported slavery were free, all the people who support abortion live..."

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It seems you have a thing for 5W poems. Not a critisim just observing. I like that. Keeping things simple. As a suggestion I might say that especially on sites like these, you want a more intriguing title. Even if your poem is short and simple, the title can add so much to a poem. My opinion. Do with it what you will.