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Dedicated

April 22, 2013
By AngelAlexandria SILVER, Ridgeland, South Carolina
AngelAlexandria SILVER, Ridgeland, South Carolina
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I dedicate this life for me
Not you.
I'm part of something bigger
That will change your mind and our world.

I dedicate this verse to all the woman
Who were put down because of their looks.
There's nothing wrong with the way you look
Everyone is beautiful, yo just need to show it.

I dedicate this heart to us,
For the one who's there for me when i cry
You're the one who makes me laugh
And makes my cheeks blush as red as roses.

I dedicate this poem to everyone in pain,
To all the broken hearts and tortured souls.
Time may be tough right now but remember this:
You don't need money because money makes man a monster.



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on Apr. 23 2013 at 12:33 pm
k8husted PLATINUM, Central Point, Oregon
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I like this, a little more emotion and details and this would be fantastic. Also the ending sounds like it belongs in a different poem, its a little off topic. Try to tie it in somehow and your golden. Great Job! Favorite line: I'm part of something bigger that will change your mind and our world.