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Black Hole
April 13, 2013
The dark I feel is unreal
Unlike anything anyone feels
The pain festering
Letting out crimson gold
Letting me see the sunshine
Warm and colored red
Driving out the cold I feel
In my heart and soul
Protecting me from the pain
Of living,breathing,feeling
Feeling things on a different level
Like my senses are super heightened
But in all the wrong areas
The dark closing in on me
Slowly but surely loosing sanity
© Amanda T., Montague, NJ
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This article has 5 comments.
Under-the-Rain GOLD said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 7:23 pm
I love your structure and how you added imagery, but I wish you wrote more of this poem. My favorite line is "The dark closing in on me// Slowly but surely loosing sanity." Excellent word choice, and I like how it flows. I LOVE THIS POEM :)
AmorMoritur PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 5:32 pm
profound just seems like such an inadequate word...it is...in the sense of a true poet, it is startling beyond believe, catching my breath and ripping it from my lungs, then filling them with sweeter softer flows. simply astounding...i LOVE it :)
sleeping-beauty_gurl PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 9:46 am
Thank you!!! :) this poem was really hard to write because I wanted to describe how I felt and describing feelings is really hard. Thank you for taking the time to read this!! :)
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