During the process of this project, I made a lot of changes and revisions that I have made throughout my poem deal heavily with the layout of my poem. When writing this poem in the past I was less aware of the significance of line breaks and that the format of the poem can also add a more poetic feel to the author’s work. I also took out a lot of unnecessary words to emphasis more important words in each line. I also tried to break up words with dashes to signify breaks and breaths while reading my poem. Overall I tried to improve my poem through a more fluent lay out and format, this is to help readers emphasis words, word breaks, and to overall just entertain the readers and give them something entertaining and fun to read.