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Thank-You

April 1, 2013
By freewritergurl SILVER, Summerfield, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
never give up

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I thought I could pass, anything in my path, but apparently it's hard, I can never get far. I try and try, but each time all I can do is sigh, what I don't know is why, life comes at you like a fly. Times are long, it's hard to get along, like in you path is king-kong. Blocking you from anywhere, when you try to get somewhere, this I say is very unfair. What can I do, to get somewhere new? Do I have to give up, is that what's-up? I don't know what to do, why can't people understand that too? I'm not giving up, I'm better than that stuff. I can do things in life, if only I try. People are telling me so, but I won't accept that, I guess it's time that I do, because there's only a few, more times that I can say,"Thank You."

© Edgard B., Coral Springs, FL

The author's comments:
I have been through alot through life, and the people who have helped me get through things, I want to say "Thank You." I have learned to never give up in life, just because my biological parents did, I have to be strong for my younger brother, because I'm all he has, and the people who have helped get us through, you are a true blessing in our life.
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