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Concealed

March 12, 2013
By JamesSharpe SILVER, Spring, Texas
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JamesSharpe SILVER, Spring, Texas
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"To dare is to lose one's footing momentarily. Not to dare is to lose oneself." -S. Kierkegaard

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I guess you couldn’t see it.
It isn’t obvious, you know,
How these sentiments rolled,
How they gathered like snow.

And they were dammed
They were, by a swollen spirit.
Funny how it works
But you couldn’t see it.

Now I’m broken,
Sundered, torn, and weak,
But now, oh now,
I can finally speak.

You broke me, thank you
Now I’m not concealed,
My thoughts and sentiments
Can be revealed.

© Christina G., Bedford, NH

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