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Insomnia

March 7, 2013
By maximel GOLD, Dakar, Other
maximel GOLD, Dakar, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“There is nothing you can see that is not a flower; there is nothing you can think that is not the moon.”

— Matsuo Bashō (松尾 芭蕉)


You refuse to listen to the song that you used to call "ours"
There are too many memories and it keeps you awake.

And so you avoid it. And the months pass on
And you feel a lot better. You don't mind being alone.

And one day you hear the song by accident
And you feel nothing. The storm has passed, you think.

But you don’t know, that
It’s not the song that once was "ours",

But the song that used to make you fall asleep when "ours" was real
That keeps you wide awake.



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JRaye PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2014 at 8:39 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

Spooky feel to it - really great! :)

HudaZav SILVER said...
on May. 11 2014 at 12:18 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

Wow, truly wonderful poem, and it was very unexpecting. good job!