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Tears of the Sky

March 8, 2013
By MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. "
Thomas Gray


It is ice,
On my fiery skin.
Grasping my thoughts of rage,
Pulling me,
From a place of hurt and suffering,
Back to reality.
I stand outside,
My flesh exposed,
Absorbing the pain,
And ice that burns me,
All contained in the tears of the sky.
It feels good.


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Tell me what you think, I'm not afraid of criticism

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on Aug. 2 2014 at 7:16 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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wtf did this loser actually comment that same thing on all your stuff!? he is so immature and a major looser. You work is beautifully done and i really like it...it sounds awesome.  

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lordfarquad BRONZE, Arlen, Texas
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nikki1 SILVER said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 11:06 am
nikki1 SILVER, Tunkahnnock, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
i love you not only for what you are but for what i am when i am with you

very beautifully written.

Priya Modi said...
on Apr. 10 2013 at 11:32 pm
Nature beauty lies in your poem..keep it up