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I Am Now Complete

February 25, 2013
By Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
28 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take.” -Wayne Gretzy

My life is now complete
My soul is now whole
All my dreams have become my
I’ve finally found the gorgeous girl
With an amazing personality
She is truly one in a million
But with her smile and those eyes
She’s one in a trillion
I’m so in love with this girl
That I plan to propose
To ask her to be mine forever
And who knows,
Maybe she’ll say yes or maybe she’ll say no
But I won’t get an answer unless I propose
This is the smartest decision that I’ve made,
In my entire life
I know it’s a smart decision because
I truly want her to be my wife
I can tell that she will want to marry
Just by the way she stares at me
She looks at me in a away I have never seen
I can see the love in her eyes
I can see it in her heart as well
There’s so much love it in,
It’s beginning to swell
I can see that she loves me
I know that she wants to be with me
For all of eternity
I know this for a fact because
I just proposed
She said yes, she would love it
She would love to be together forever
With her I want to grow old
I’ll do anything to make her happy
Keep her cool when she’s hot,
Or keep her warm when she’s not
The purpose of my life now,
Is to make her completely happy
And I’m going to seal it with a vow

The author's comments:
This all a true story, this poem was inspired by my current relationship with the most amazing girl in the world. My baby boo :)

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sophia0 BRONZE said...
on May. 7 2013 at 5:46 pm
sophia0 BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't judge a book by its cover

aww... that's so sweet. i almost cried reading it. <tears tears> write more

PirateGirl said...
on Mar. 6 2013 at 10:18 am
PirateGirl, No Where, Tennessee
0 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take what you can, and give nothing back.
-Jack Sparrow

The red coats are coming. The red coats are coming.
-Garrett (Breaking Dawn Part 2)

Shows feeling. Good job.

on Mar. 6 2013 at 10:02 am
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

*tries to wipe tears away* There aren't many men like this out there. B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.