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she is my flower

February 12, 2013
By raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
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raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
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Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.

~Barbara de Angel

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she was my flower,
she made my heart stand still,
she is my flower,
my daffodil.

I am her wall,
so sturdy and tall,
I am her wall,
cracks and all.

She is my will,
my power to live,
she is my will,
she keeps my heart active.

I am her bow,
she my arrow,
I am her buffalo,
she my doe.

She is my sunshine,
so bright and warm,
I am her clouds,
just before a storm.

finally,I'm her planet,
she my star,
we both love each other,
but only from afar.

© Nicole B., Newcastle, WA

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I was inspired to write this poem when my girlfriend broke up with me.
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Firefaerie SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2014 at 7:30 pm
Firefaerie SILVER, Austin, Texas
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"Do not pity the dead. pity the living, and above all, those who live without love" - J.K Rowling
"There's always another secret" -Brandon Sanderson

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Loved it absolutely loved it :)
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE said...
on Nov. 7 2013 at 11:27 am
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.

~Barbara de Angel

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thank you yall!!  i havent been online for a long time, but i apreciate all the feedback. i will try to post more poetry   :)
SSSplatters PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 23 2013 at 8:11 pm
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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Love it so beautiful
SoulPoetry PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2013 at 4:20 pm
SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
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This is the sweetest poem i've ever read in my life :) I love the way you worded everything. The rhyme sceme in this poem made it catchy and songlike C: great job!!!!!
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE said...
on Jun. 9 2013 at 9:57 pm
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.

~Barbara de Angel

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thank you   :)  thats so kind
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 3 2013 at 10:34 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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This is just beautiful! Wonderful job! I'm very surprised they haven't published this in their magazine! Keep trying! ~Free ;)(:
Chattyquill SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2013 at 7:24 pm
Chattyquill SILVER, --------------, Other
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i told you i oved this poem, no doubt others would love it too :)
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2013 at 5:59 pm
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
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Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.

~Barbara de Angel

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thank you  :)
Apostolic-Girl SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2013 at 2:52 pm
Apostolic-Girl SILVER, Athens, Ohio
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I totally love this... I never thought you would be the romance type ray, but i admit this is AWESOME!!!!
TheMadBrine said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 4:50 pm
TheMadBrine, Sylvania, Ohio
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This is cool! I am not one for poetry though haha but good nonetheless:)
LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 1:10 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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'Aw this is cute! I really like this one with its imagery. Applausos
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2013 at 12:14 am
raymondbvbpaul BRONZE, Sanandreas, California
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a force more formidable than any other. It is invisible- it cannot be seen or measured, yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment, and offer you more joy than any other material posesion could.

~Barbara de Angel

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thank you all you guys   :)
PriyaModi BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2013 at 12:09 am
PriyaModi BRONZE, Indore, Other
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nice one..your flower might be happy reading this
EnnaGirl SILVER said...
on Apr. 3 2013 at 10:31 pm
EnnaGirl SILVER, Sacramento, California
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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!! it was so moving, so sweet. FANTABULOUS JOB!!  
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2013 at 11:19 am
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i really liked your poem
Powla SILVER said...
on Mar. 25 2013 at 11:56 am
Powla SILVER, PHX, Arizona
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the endings sad :( but i like it
Lydia3 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2013 at 11:10 pm
Lydia3 BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
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Awesome poem
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
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i love it al lot
Hannah_Ignatiuk16 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 19 2013 at 10:26 am
Hannah_Ignatiuk16 BRONZE, Bryant, Arkansas
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i really liked the layout of the poem and it felt like you ment it