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Crush

January 31, 2013
By thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
67 articles 0 photos 211 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"


Crush
Comes without a warning and
Pushes you hard, down the ground,
Defenceless.
Crush
Increases your blood pressure
And colors your face hurriedly like
A nursery kid in a painting contest.
Crush
Paralyzes your strong athletic feet
And tickles you inside till
You wobble like a klutzy jelly.
Crush
Looks so hypnotically hot
That your head will be in the Sahara
When you’re only still in Serbia.
Crush
May crush your fragile little
Fist sized heart, ruthlessly
By not returning your unsolicited favor.
Crush
Will speak honeyed words like an
Angel from paradise, but when you would
Be too frozen and,
Busy looking at its beautiful lips,
It will lose interest and move away.



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on Mar. 5 2013 at 10:20 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

Oh my god, all those comparisons are breathtakingly true!  My especially fav one is "And tickles you inside till You wobble like a klutzy jelly" And Sahara and Siberia! Awesome. I like this poem a lot! I was smiling all the way through...:D

on Feb. 23 2013 at 6:11 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I like it! You made the word crush so powerful like the emotions are in real life.

on Feb. 16 2013 at 1:01 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

  I like this. :) I think it’s something that lots of people would be able to relate to.

on Feb. 14 2013 at 8:47 pm
Tornado Misha BRONZE, Ng, Other
1 article 0 photos 53 comments
I didn't get it until it was explained in the comments XD. Well, I think it's a nice concept although the "athletic feet" seems out of place and it seems like you are making all sorts of references about something which the reader is not aware about. If you could make your subject more clear, this would be a very relatable poem. The last few lines are golden by the way!

on Feb. 12 2013 at 5:05 pm
SteelersJdog GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 29 comments
Fantastic work, very up front and real. I like the comparisons that you drew as well.

on Feb. 9 2013 at 8:41 am
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
67 articles 0 photos 211 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

heehe. u can take itt anyway, but i meant the loved up crush teens have on a hottie :P 

on Feb. 9 2013 at 12:00 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

love it!!!  

on Feb. 8 2013 at 8:02 pm
RebelGirl08313 GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Just cause a girl doesn't have a man doesn't mean she is weak. It just means that she is strong enough to not need a man...

i dont understand it

on Feb. 8 2013 at 7:43 pm
Roe-Daniels BRONZE, >>>>>>>, Other
2 articles 0 photos 49 comments
This is really interesting. Well done

patriot83 said...
on Feb. 8 2013 at 7:27 pm
patriot83, Riverside, California
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
This is really good:p So true as well!

on Feb. 8 2013 at 6:13 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

I thought that this was actually really good! Liked the concept behind it!

on Feb. 8 2013 at 12:29 pm
k8husted PLATINUM, Central Point, Oregon
27 articles 3 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bliss Cavendar:(Whip it 2009) The last time I wore skates, they had
Barbies on them.

LOL! thats what i was thinking! What is Crush? like a love crush? Drug? drink? Im lost. lol

on Feb. 7 2013 at 10:50 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Is crush like a drug or something?