Hatred | TeenInk


January 31, 2013
By Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.

Hatred is a painful dred,
A flaming arosin in the head,
Sitting in your stomach hard as led,
A powerful thing given the cred,
Hatred has a life,
It loves to thrive,
It rests in your heart buzzing in its hive,
Hatred causes racism murder and more,
Once you have hatred it goes deep in your core,
While its in it takes a full mind tour,
Love has no chance when hatred involved,
Only a pure mind can have the problem resolved,
Over the years hatred has grown and evolved,
Hatred detroys families,
You know hatreds reached its grand finally,
When love is gone,
And armageddon has begun.

The author's comments:
This is a feeling that i feel often

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alone13 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2013 at 10:31 am
alone13 BRONZE, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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I definatly can relate to this poem

on Feb. 7 2013 at 12:44 pm
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

well, that was a piece I completely agree with, and is a strong topic as well. But you could polish it a bit to get a smoother flow of words perhaps, and the rhyming scheme hasn't worked out well.