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Make Me

January 23, 2013
By Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
36 articles 1 photo 77 comments

Make me
I want to be pushed, and shoved, and destroyed
By you, and only by you
Yes it sounds twisted.
It is twisted.
But only you can make me
Only you can make me make something
Only you can make me blush
Make me smile
Make me cry
Only you can make me scream
Make me moan
Make me wonder
Don't just stand there,
Make me.
Make me into ME
The “me” that I need to be.
You are the only one who can make me
Make me try
Make me fail
Take control. Control me.
You can make me safe
Make me whisper
Make me sob
Make me shudder-
Shudders of pain
And shudders of ecstasy
Please, please make me.
You are the only one-
Who can make me numb
Who can make me feel
You are the only one
Who can make me run-
Make me want
Make me hope
Make me love
So what are you waiting for?
Make me.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Mar. 24 2013 at 12:04 am
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

It was amazing it made you think more on the essence of lvoe and the magic behind what young couples like others said feel it wys just amazing

on Feb. 28 2013 at 4:47 pm
Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
28 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take.” -Wayne Gretzy

wow that was completely amazing. you captured the essense of love. you perfectly decribed what millions of young couples feel. I can relate to this story because that is how my girlfriend makes me feel :) so thanks for writing such a beautiful piece of poetry

on Feb. 5 2013 at 11:41 pm
little-bird-girl GOLD, Flemington, New Jersey
13 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For poise, walk with the knowledge that you never walk alone."

This is beautiful. The use of those two words is so are a fantastic writer!!