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Starstruck

January 10, 2013
By SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
29 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will work harder" (animal farm boxer the horse)


Your beauty is a supernova.
Explosive and radiant.
Seen from all depths of the endless space.
And I Mars am gaping at you.
Taking all your blows.
Wanting more and more.
How enticing to be struck by a star such a yourself.
Each blow from your seemingly endless barrage bruising this sober planet into drunkenness.
I'm addicted. Falling out of orbit and routine.
Staggering through asteroids to find you to keep me in this state.
Finally found peace in lonely space.
Even after sobering up from you, you're still the definition of beauty.
The lonely red planet now wants to explore the rubble of beauty.
There will be an even greater beauty in the ashes.
Rising to become the universal Phoenix.
Flaring in the cold, empty galaxy.
Warming the other isolated planets.
All now starstruck.


The author's comments:
This one girl.

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on May. 31 2013 at 6:37 pm
SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
29 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will work harder" (animal farm boxer the horse)

Thanks :) and my name is Alex by the way  

on May. 30 2013 at 11:58 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Oh, hello! I've missed hearing from you, I feel like it's been awhile. Just so you know, I check on you from time to time if you have anything new. Don't think I've forgotten you. I love the title but after reading the poem the title meant even more.. it was brought to life. I admire the fact that a lot of your poems are dedicated to 'this one girl'. It's so kind! She must be a wonderful girl, as you are wonderful as well. I love your poems. The love always radiates through. And the feeling of space made the poem so vast and beautiful. Your word choices make it that much better. The visuals are wonderful. This was angelic. I think this may be my favorite poem from you besides 'Aphrodite'. I still read that one from time to time, it's really lovely. Great job, as always. And I have a quick questions which you aren't obligated to answer.. what's your name? I'd like to call you by your name as you are so kind. But, if you'd rather not share your name, I'll just call you Soul.

on Apr. 12 2013 at 7:04 pm
SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
29 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will work harder" (animal farm boxer the horse)

I just noticed the mistake thank you very much for the comment :)

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on Apr. 11 2013 at 11:45 pm
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
16 articles 16 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....

really beautiful poem.. little mistake though "a" instead of  "as" but stil love it...

on Mar. 30 2013 at 8:02 pm
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
2 articles 4 photos 23 comments
This is so beautiful and fantastic continue writing because your really good (:

on Jan. 18 2013 at 3:58 pm
SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
29 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will work harder" (animal farm boxer the horse)

Awww thank you :D well this poem could be used for any girl pretty much.

on Jan. 18 2013 at 3:51 pm
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

this is so wonderful good work with words this girl must be lucky to have someone like u to write this about her