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Colours

December 13, 2012
By larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
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If the sky is blue,
Than what's the ocean?
Sometimes I have no clue,
My mind goes to the pink cotton candy,
so fluffy and sticky,
sometimes its so tricky,
I peel the rotten orange and I feel sorry,
nobody watanted it,
might as well see Mari,
Purple i find, is like a bruising,
though many like the colour,
Life's all so confusing,
Grey is like the fog in the forest,
We're blinded, no light,
let's sing the chorus!
Gold as the dusk and dawn i see,
I lay silently watching,
And I make a wish to be free.



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Zach_M said...
on May. 4 2013 at 3:23 pm
Creative!! I enjoyed this... you had fun with this one. I could tell!! I like it.. it brought a smile across my face.

on Mar. 31 2013 at 6:49 pm
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
7 articles 0 photos 44 comments
thank you, i appreciate it :)

on Mar. 31 2013 at 6:48 pm
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
7 articles 0 photos 44 comments
thank you so much

on Mar. 31 2013 at 3:44 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

this was cute :) I liked how the words flow.. It's like a multicolored beaded chain and it lightens the mood :) good job :)

on Mar. 30 2013 at 5:20 pm
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance

pretty good! i like the element of describing and the symbolism of the colours