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Drinkin up

November 27, 2012
By AbdiikassaSpudMufasa GOLD, Secaucus, New Jersey
AbdiikassaSpudMufasa GOLD, Secaucus, New Jersey
18 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Onto the next great adventure

....pour it bartender
Or just give me the bottle
No I don't want to die
Of course I'll pay the bill
...pour it bartender
Let my soul lighten
Let me get some sleep
I need to forget
What should've been
....pour it bartender
Do what you're paid to do
I want it neat
three cubes of ice
and double the dose
...pour it bartender
i need to cry a bit
I need to feel a bit
Maybe just a little bit
...pour it bartender
The devil he wont take my soul
He's said my hell's up here
he Likes it when i squirm
When i lift the phone to call
and put it softly down
... pour it bartender
Play me something sad
I'll leave in a while
...pour me one more bartender
Its the last one
I swear
....pour it bartender
Let me forget, why you're pouring

The author's comments:
A dingy bar scene and a lost soul

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on Jun. 2 2013 at 10:18 am
Scarlett_the_pegacorn BRONZE, Niceville, Florida
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This is amazing! Held me captivated till the last word. 

on May. 28 2013 at 10:26 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

THIS IS SO GOOOOD!! It's amazing XD I love the emotion and the feeling of getting lost beyond your sorrows. It's definitely a favorite :)

on Dec. 7 2012 at 6:36 pm
JeremiahSamuelTemple BRONZE, Monroe, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I was never insane except upon occasions when my heart was touched." ~ Edgar Allan Poe

And on his way home, the memories of past mistakes come flooding back, as another of this demons trick to burn, just another trick to watch me squirm.

Keep on going. The scene is set, a story may form, as just another person's private storm.

on Dec. 7 2012 at 4:16 pm
Madison_E BRONZE, Brownstown, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you.

You created such an amazing scene with this poem, i loved it (:

on Dec. 7 2012 at 12:50 pm
i really like this it can really connect to people keep on writeing