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Where I Come From

November 20, 2012
By alindasaint SILVER, Boynton Beach, Florida
alindasaint SILVER, Boynton Beach, Florida
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I am from where music is my life
Where reality exists only in my head
I am from where emotions cut like a knife
And where I'm uneasily read
Where poetry is my mood ring
Where my future is contemplated
I am from where hurt is what stings
Where freedom is awaited
Where my generation has changed
And our hearts are rearranged
I am from where everything is said and done
Where "How To Love" means something
Where it can only mean one thing
I am from "iReminisce"
Where memory is missed
Where I am writing this
Where judgement persists
Where tomorrow is a broken promise
I am from where this is finished



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PiperBloo GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2012 at 9:18 pm
PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"there are 2 types of writer's: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder"Brian Aldiss
"Some things i cannot change but til i try i'll never know" Wicked the musical

i mean quite beautiful

PiperBloo GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2012 at 9:15 pm
PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
12 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"there are 2 types of writer's: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder"Brian Aldiss
"Some things i cannot change but til i try i'll never know" Wicked the musical

i love the diction used. really quote beautiful. however, the flow leaves something to be desired. It doesn't have too much of a flow to it, nor does it have a rhyme scheme. I understand why that's why it's called free verse, but you atempted to rhyme and and really wasn't working for me. Lovely idea and imagry! keep writing!